Preliminary Exercise Feedback and Learner Response
Preliminary Exercise Feedback and Learner Response 1) WWW: The overall positive and lively tone of the video clips matches the happy and energetic tone of the song. Given your choice of a non-English song, I believe that the inclusion of the lyrics at the bottom of the video is a good one for overall inclusivity. You’ve used a range of different camera shots and angles throughout which all add a different sense/feeling to the video as a whole. Next Steps: Whilst incredibly positive, I’m not getting a clear message running throughout as asked for in the brief. Consider what your changes that you want to see are, and how these can be completed within a wider community, as this is the aim. I think you could do with a few more ‘stable’ shots that feel calmer and more collected to even out the more high-energy running shots.